W.A.L.T:Create an animation that includes at least 1 tip on What a quality blog comment is.
I enjoyed making a animation for the first time.
What I found challenging was that I wasnt here when they learnt how to do a quality blog comment so I wasnt sure how to do it.
Have You ever made a Animation?
Comment if you want to know how its done.
Hey Astyn,
ReplyDeleteI am the Education Leader for Uru Mānuka in Christchurch. It is so cool to see your animation. I love the characters and the message that you have shared. I will show it to my learners to see what they think! Great first effort. What made you pick a horse, pig and seagull?
- Miss Morgan
Hi Miss Morgan I´m not really sure why I picked the pig but I picked the horse so that it could just be a but more Realistic and I picked the seagull because it matched the beach look.
DeleteGood thinking! Thank you for replying to my comment.
DeleteKia ora Astyn,
ReplyDeleteI work as a facilitator in Learn, Create, Share in other schools.
I like the way your animals have a conversation to tell us about quality blog comments. I think you could make your ipad a bit bigger so the writing is bigger and easier to see.
Mrs Krausse
Thanks Astyn that is a cool way to introduce positive thoughtful helpful. I would love to see any other animation you make if it has a good message.
ReplyDeleteHello Dave My class have made positive animations as well You should check out our Kakapo class blog to see more.
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Deletegood job
ReplyDeleteHi I am Ranit from Hornby High School, I like your animation slideshow. It was really good and you put a lot of work in it which is great. From your slideshow I liked the part when that flying angel pig came from the afternoon sky I guess, other than that everything is good. I have a question about your slideshow...
Deletehow did the pig get a phone and how will you get a quality blog comment?
Another think is that your writing on the phone is blurry and I could not read it. That's OK but that's one think you can try and improve on your other future blog post. What did the horse have to do with the topic you are doing?
Well done on your blog post, I liked it.
-Ranit
I like the way you have included the flying pig it was funny I also like how you showed how to comment
ReplyDeletegood job on the animaition
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ReplyDeleteHi Astyn, I am a student from Hornby High School in Christchurch. I really liked your animation that you've made. It's a good message to tell people to comment on your blog. Also the animation hooks the audience to make sure that they watch the whole animation. One thing that I think that you should do, may be you should've wrote what was in the picture. But overall the animation was awesome!! Have a cool day!! Bye!!
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ReplyDeleteyou really did a good job with your post and it does introduce positive thoughtful and helpful things.
Hi Astyn
ReplyDeleteI love your characters especially the pig and I love the way you explained your learning
Poppy
Heo thankyou pops
DeleteHey There Astyn It's Niko from Hornby High School I like that you told us that you trying to make a quality blog comment and maybe the animation could be a little bit better and the I phone part is really hard to read.
ReplyDeleteGood job keep the work up and keeping doing good quality blog posts.
Hi Astyn, I am a student at HHS (Hornby High School). I really liked your animation that you have made. I also think that it really hooks the audience that makes them watch the whole animation. But the picture that you used was a bit blurry, maybe you could have just wrote what it said. Overall It is a really amazing animation.
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ReplyDeleteHey Astyn, you done really good work, I like how you put the animation in the correct place. I Also like the wallpaper because it's bright, and now I know how to post a quality blog comment.
ReplyDeleteHey Astyn, nice job on the animation it was really worked hard on. Something you could do next time is make the photo clearer to read by using the "Photo Enhancement" setting but otherwise you did a very great job.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kody.
i think that you had an amazing animation it told me how to comment on blogs
ReplyDeleteHi, Astyn i'm a student at Hornby High School. I really like your animation even do it's your first time doing blogging. I like the part that you told us how to do a quality blog using animals. I really like it, keep up the good work.
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ReplyDeleteHi Astyn I am Keghan from Hornby High School, I like your animation it is funny because of the flying pig.We should be able to see what the writing looks like on the phone.
great post
ReplyDeleteWOW! I did not know that I would get this many comments
ReplyDeleteThank you And dont forget to check out my class mates blogs on
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that animation was so cool i loved the flying pig come check out my blog https://pcsrileyj.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteKonnichiwa Astyn, this is a fantastic blog post. I like the way you have shared this important message via an animation. You have been clever moving multiple objects on the same slide. I also like the way you used perspective to make the bird smaller as it moved to the background.
ReplyDeleteYou ask in the post about our experience creating animations. I have made many animations. I have used software like; Hyperstudio, Photoshop, I Can Animate, Scratch and more to animate. I look forward to seeing how you take your skills and try using other apps for this.
Mrs Burt
Manaiakalani
Great work astyn i Really enjoyed watching your animation(:
ReplyDeleteI loved your characters and background.
-KATA
If you want to see what the writing is on the phone push the full screen button
ReplyDeletecool animation Astyn
ReplyDeleteThanks kata
ReplyDeleteThankyou Milin😁
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